Monday, 28 September 2015

Case Study of DJ Magazine (Improvement).

The text that is in bold is the improved sections. I have only improved analyses of the contents page and the double spread page as these are the only sections mentioned for improvement in the feedback I got.

1 comment:

  1. These are good improvements Adrija and you have carefully taken on board the feedback from the first draft. Well done. Vanessa

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