I have completed my front cover and now I need to get some feedback on it so I can make some changes and make it better. I have also completed my contents page and I don't think there is much that I need to change. For the DPS I still need to add more things. I need to add the cover line on the image and decide what to do with the empty space. I think I am going to add an introduction and add extra information about her tour to end the article. This should fill up the empty space at the bottom.
The layout of your DPS is simple but effective and the use of pull quotes is engaging to the reader. The photo is good quality and the location matches the genre however it could have been cleaned up more in photoshop as the face is too bright. The contents page looks professional however some of the text is hard to read because it's white on white. The front cover has a good photo however there seems to be a lot of empty space and the font choice for the cover lines seem too simple. Overall, this is a good music magazine that conveys the genre well but only needs a few improvements.
ReplyDeleteThe front cover - i told you already
ReplyDeleteContent page - nothing to improve. you need to help me instead wiv mine
DPS - You just need to add more information on the page .. but apart from that your all good ;)